hey! This chapter was really good, like reaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaally good. Cuz like you kept things simple but interesting! I can't wait to see how the story unfolds!
I'm glad you had fun in disneyland btw :) and the one time I went I couldn't go on Space mountain because they were fixing it...anyways, I really enjoyed the chapter (and the story in gereal :D). xx,a.
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that suuucks actually when I was waiting in line one of the workers came out and told us it broke down but I stayed in line cause they usually fix it pretty quick :D thanks