Review for Calling You

Calling You

(#) comatosejoyx 2011-07-02

That was beautiful. I think I'd have liked a bit of a longer build up in the story but as long as they don't jump into bed in the next chapter, you haven't used up all ideas like some authors. I'm sure there's a lot more greatness to come :)

Author's response

Thank you!
And thanks for your feedback. The next chapter definitely has no sex in it! ;) (Although, i did write a future sex scene.....hah)
I'll make sure to move a bit slower. :D