Review for Calling You

Calling You

(#) andreajp 2011-07-05

Cookies and cream with white chocolate truffles?! I'm going to mess up my keypad from all the drooling!

This story is giving me flash backs it's so crazy! Is your name Precious lol. Precious and I worked together at a grocery store called ACME, we got done our shifts at about the same time, I want to say 4ish our first date we got sandwiches and some mac and cheese and went to her place, it was closest and she didn't have an annoying older brother that lived with her name Matt that had off that night. She lived alone with her mom. Everything went great, we watched the sound of music, we are both nerds lol. Her mom told her she was going to be home later then normal which her normal time would've been like 9:45-10:00 so we well have enough time. I was the Gee in the situation, instead of kissing her I just held her hand and kissed the back of it, won't go into detail, just some making out....then we heard the car door slam it was like 11:30, they say time flies by while your making out lol. While she was going through the front door my ass bolted through the back. I could tell from the look she gave me that if her mother saw me, we are going to both be dead. I texted her and told her I was in her backyard hiding behind her shed and to come out when her mom went to bed. After what felt like hours I heard movement, then she whispered "come out come out wherever you are...." I felt like a puddle because I was still freaking out, and here she was being a dork. Anywho real long story as you could see, her mom is a homophobe church going Latina lady, and if she caught us making out on the couch she would flip out and most likely kick her out. So from then on I dealt with my brother being a dork around us because my mother and brother love me for just the way I am.

I don't know why but I love telling my life story to you. If you couldn't catch how much I loved this chapter from the book I just wrote...guess what I loved this and I can't wait for the second date!

Author's response

Haaha! I know, I had a few on 4th of July, and I just had to incorporate it into the story! lol.

Haha! No, it's not. :D Awww that sounds like an absolutely adorable date! Seriously those are the best kinds of dates whereit's just relaxing and laid back! But oh my god! That's so scary! How long were you in her backyard? I would have like....peed my pants. lol.

I don't mind at all! :D :D
I'm so glad you liked it! :D