this is amazingly well written for a first, i mean pfft should see mine lol not good...so probs shouldnt XD happiness or misert? yeah XD
anyway this is great and i love it so far, hehe i will defo read more after much needed sleep XD again great job well written
chazom
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I have actually read yours :3 It's prettay damn good :D
it's not my first, but my second. My first one's a Rydon... that one kinda sucks- i ended up finishing it off early because i ran out of ideas and no-one was reading it :L