Review for First of the Gang to Die

First of the Gang to Die

(#) AdnarimSmada 2011-07-22

"But many there stood still
To face the stark blank sky beyond the ridge,
Knowing their feet had come to the end of the world"

LORNA NI IONNRACHTAIGH, HOLY SHIT!!! WILFRED OWEN REFERENCE! AHHHHH! "SPRING OFFENSIVE"!!! HOLY SHIT, THAT'S LIKE ONE OF MY FAVORITE POEMS FROM HIS WORK!!! YOU ARE EPIC HONEY GIRL! YOU FUCKING WIN AT LIFE!!! AFTERLIFE TOO!!!

Katherine, if you see this review, those lines of that poetry are supposed to bother you. That poem is based off one of the battles at Ypres in Belgium during the first world war!

Oh, and seriously, good luck honey! Good luck with your education and with wherever your life takes you my dear! Thank you so much for all your gracious compliments and support on my writing as well. I can't even begin to express my gratitude! It has been such an honor knowing you.
USA! FTW! Maybe, after my pen name gets big, I'll look you "literary whores" up. :)

-Adnarim Smada