OOOOH! Clues! MIKEY LIKEY!
Okay, so far I'm loving your work! I wasn't able to read it this week until now because of stupid homeworks, so I just gave it up for awhile. But anyways, ME GUSTA. I'm imagining right now what would happen with the whole thing....very suspicious....
PLEASE DON'T SAY THAT SOMEONE WOULD DIE, 'CAUSE I SEE THAT THE FUTURE IS BULLETPROOF UNLIKE HUMANS AND IT SOUNDS LIKE SOMEONE'S GOING TO DIE! (Sorry for the paranoia.) I'd die for anyone in the story, though.
Author's response
Good to know that you read it still! I really love your reviews, they make me smile!
Love means sacrafice.