Nice. Your chapters are really short, so anyone reading this xcan't lose interest. Short chapters, no beating around the bush, you just go to the point. And as for the 'illiterate'comment, if it really bothers you, you could always check for spellings and grammar on a word document or something. I know it's writing and everyone makes mistakes. If you need any help for a chapter or something just ask. And as for some on the fools who don't like your writing, don't let it bother you, cause I like it ten times more than they hate it ;)
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thank you, which "illiterate" comment?" :O
your such a nice reviewer :)