Review for First of the Gang to Die

First of the Gang to Die

(#) Torogirl15 2011-08-07

Oh. MY. God. I just read this entire story in, like, 6 hrs on my dad's iPod, and I think I like shit myself almost 80 times. I swear to God, this is literally THE BEST MCR fanficion I've ever read, and Ive been around the block, ya know. Please, for the love of all that is Ray's afro, ADD MORE TO THIS STORY!!!!!! I am so serious, Mafia Gerard is the Sexiest thing on the Internet. And about the teen black girl comment a few chapters back, please, just out of respect for the black girls who grew up in Lutheran schools and act pretty (emo) white, put the word "ghetto" in there. I was slightly offended, because Lornaigh's racist comments weren't true about her own kind, so… yeah, that's my only request. This long-ass review is over. TOROGIRL IS OUT, BITCHEZZ!!! PEACE!!!!!!!!