that was hot AS! you're VERY good at this! i LOVE your writing so much! keep up the AMAZING work :3
- kirrah xx
Author's response
hehe awwww thank youuu ^.^ well it's my first so i'm really glad you like it, i hope to be improving with the sex scenes though XD
be sure to check out my 'Happiness or Misery?' if you havn't. It's doing good and there will be a saucy scene soon hehe
thanks again
chazom
xx