I like. :]
Was my original review. But no. No, no, no. They demanded intellectual rigor! And also $3,000 in small, unmarked bills.
So, I really like this story so far. It paints an image in my head that's clear, and makes sense.
Now if I only had $3,000...
Author's response
Lol. Thank you! I'm working on the next chapter as we speak. ;)