Okay, this is meant to be constructive!!
Linda would a seamstress, not sewer. I thought a sewer, spelt that was, was a waste facility :L
Very good! Don't worry to much about how they talk.. as long as you don't use obviously modern words like "dude" I'm sure you'll come across just fine!
xo
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oh shit! I didn't pay attention to that...English isn't really my first language so I kinda mix up words sometimes :L I'll fix it. thanks for pointing it out(: