Review for 1.The Only Hope For Me Is You

1.The Only Hope For Me Is You

(#) Kid_Vicous 2011-08-30

I like this. It's quite cute and surprisingly addictive. Even if I didn't like it I would have to keep reading. But there are quite a few grammar/spelling mistakes which I think would really benefit from some looking at. For example: "I don't anyone would understand just how fucking great he truly is." A word is missing after the "don't". Can you guess what it is? It's "think". I can see quite a few of those mistakes in here.

I do like how you write the characters though. You've got a good grasp on Frank and how nervous he is about starting a gay relationship. Good job. I'll keep reading.