WOW! I can't believe you didn't know if this was good or not! It's awesome, very original and extremel descriptive. I think it might be Frank and the person who was saying 'remember me' was Gerard. I really hope you update this soon because I will be keeping an eye on it, waiting for the next chapter
Author's response
thanks a lot:) i don't believe in my skills that much^^ so feedback is always welcome (i'm grinning like a total goof right now)
i work on the chapters for a long time...writing it down, re-reading it, adding parts, changing things and so on so most of the time they're kinda short, because i spent all my 'energy' on small passages o.O
ha i'm not telling!:P i kinda plan on keeping it a secret for a long time (something to do with the plot) but i'm not sure how it'll work out...
so no more hinting (if you could even call it thatxD)
i'll be writing (hopefully) xx k