I love it :D Thanks for taking my advice on the less description thing :D
Don't forget the space out your paragraphs so it feels like less of a chunk and more accessible :D
Damn! I so thought I was gonna be introduced this chapter! ;)
Keep up the good work xo
Author's response
No, thank you for the advice :)
Don`t worry, you will be in the next chapter
xoxodakota