Really good!! Kinda short but the amount of detail means that doesn't really matter. Or maybe it just felt short 'cos I read it so fast -- I wanted to find out what happens!! update soooon please!!!
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Author's response
thanks! this chapter kinda had to be short for the next one to work...will post that as soon as it's written! (: thanks for reviewing :D
CosmicZombie xo