awww man you amazine me every chapter you do, you really do :)
man i mentally scream at the screen either it be at frank or gerard haha but then you make it ok again XD
awww i had goosebumps and tingles inside as i read this, you are seriously talented at writing :) and of course you are bound to get better and better, you will have a great future if you carry on and make something of this, i really think you should :)
you are brilliant.
I just love how they are in this i love how one minute i am awwwing the next screaming, then almost crying then full of agnst and that is one thing thats very great to have in a story :) so you just wow me with that haha lol (suck up much?) XD
but yeah every chapter i love and i cannot wait for more.
chazom
xx