Review for Ides of March

Ides of March

(#) powellt 2006-10-12

This story has a great deal of potential. Unfortunately it seems a little to rushed, as well as more than little sporatic with the way it seems to jump over smaller details that would help the story greatly. Also try to get a few more plot points secured within your own mind before attempting to write, as it seems you're just brainstorming rather than producing your final product.