Happy Birthday! You're going to see them Wed? That's cool, I'm gonna see them tomorrow. 4 hr car ride to NC, but anyways about the story, I really loved it. MOst of the time, when they say 'I love you' everything somehow gets magically fixed, but I really liked how you showed the uglier, not so pleasant side of it.
Lips pressed against lips.
Chest pressed against chest.
Arms wrapped around one another.
Legs tangled together.
I don't know what it is about that part, but I just really like the way it's written.
I really like this story, and I actually wanna know what happens with the characters.