Okay.
I officially love you.
And your teacher probably loves your gay smut ('cos it's that good.). Seriously.
This story, this fuckin' story... Genius. It's not like the other mafia stories where there's blood and gore every single paragraph (pisses me off when it's like that), but this has that. On occasion. You, though, mixed in Frank, which adds a whole nother layer to the mafia thing.
And then the smut. nosebleeds
But you do sometimes scare the shit out of me. Just because how realistic things are written out to be. (I.E: the last chapter, with the vampire? Seriously, I thought that wasn't a dream. Scared the shit out of me.)
Jane, muchas gracias. I hope you are able to post everything of Lorna's.