(#) Worry 2011-10-07
Always great to read a DrT story, and this one does not disappoint. Your writing has evolved, become crisper, flows better. I was pleasantly surprised to find the story when I came back after a long time away. You are and will remain one of my favorite "Must Read" authors!
I would love to see you move beyond Hogwarts, though. Perhaps sequel some of your own stories. I had an idea reading one of yours years ago where a technomage having seen the vulnerability of Europe's antiquated Ministry in dealing with anything new decides to take over Britain. He is able to do so using High Definition Television. He discovered that while Analog would not carry spell energy, High Definition and the PAL format would. It is up to Harry and Hermione (Perhaps with Luna as well) having grown up in Britain and trained in Techno Magic to deal with him. I've never had time to develop the idea, but you are welcome to it should you be so inclined.
Anyway, always a pleasure to read you and I hope you keep at it!