Review for I need characters

I need characters

(#) Vengefulscout 2011-10-12

Can i be a ghost please?
And could i date Ray? If not, its fine :D

Name: Emily Toye

Age: 14 (or whatever fits the story)

Looks: Long brown hair, side fringe, silver-blue eyes, 5'5, pale and no make-up.

Clothes: Wears band tee's, jeans and converse most of the time and always wears her black and red fingerless gloves.

Personality: Shy, quiet, kind, self-concious and caring but can get angry easily and will lash out at anyone who hurts her friends.

Backstory: Was 12 when she was killed by a man when she was walking home from school. Came back a a ghost. She has a brother, Kai (16) and she is trying to find him as he disappered when she died (Is that okay? If not, you may change it :) )

Music Taste: MCR, Avenged Sevenfold, Black Veil Brides, Paramore, Panic!At The Disco and Tarja Turunen

Anything else: She is very smart and can tell if someone is lying or telling the truth

Storyname: Under A Black Velvet Sky ?

Hope that's all ok! Let me know if you need anything else! Happy Story Writing! Emily :D