Review for I need characters

I need characters

(#) MCRLoverCarley 2011-10-12

Can I please be a vampire?
Name: Carley
Age: 16
Looks: Short black hair, side fringe, blue eyes, black eyeliner, quite short, pale.
Clothes: band shirts and hoodies, skinny jeans, boots or converse, fingerless gloves and black nails.
Personality: shy with people she doesn't know. Hyper, crazy, easily depressed and often has suicidal thoughts, easily influenced into bad thoughts about self
Backstory: Vampire parents were killed when she was young. Raised by vampire hunters until she realised what she is. Now tries to hide that she knows
Music: any rock or metal music. Hates rap and pop shit
Anything else: plays bass guitar and does some acting and singing stuff though she believes she's not very good. Lesbian and has a habit of punching homophobic prats in the face. Has cut on her arm before.