Review for I need characters

I need characters

(#) CosmicCollision 2011-10-12

Mermaid! Mermaid!

Guy you want to date : Chris Taylor Brown from Trapt.

Name: Nina Siren

Age: 21

Looks: long black cherry hair layered, and also a fringe that parts to the right. 5'7, yeah I'm kind of tall. Slender with curvy hips. C cup boobs (I'm sure that doesn't matter, just covering everything hehe.) Sage green eyes with black long lashes. Beige creamy skin. A beauty mark above upper lip. Usually wears a nude color lip gloss. Doesn't wear too much make up besides the basics, has sensitive skin :/


Clothes:

Shirts > http://tinypic.com/r/o02wdd/7
Pants > http://tinypic.com/r/20ksncj/7
Shoes > http://tinypic.com/r/10wqzp5/7

Personality:

Back story: Born and raised in the Caribbean. Where parents were mermaids as well, but after an accidental murder, parents fled to avoid getting killed themselves where they tried to protect their daughter from finding out she was a mermaid as well as getting killed also, like never letting her go into the water and what not. Because of the constant scrutiny, she became a rebellious 'pre-teen' and snuck out one day to go to the water where she tried to drown herself, but instead found out she was a mermaid. Parents then moved her out of anger to the 'populated' area to keep her away from the water. Little do they know she still goes in the water. (I know this sounds brutally lame, so if you have to change things around, please feel free.)

Music taste: Flyleaf. Trapt. Fall Out Boy. Animals As Leaders. Yeah Yeah Yeahs. Veruca Salt. Red Hot Chili Peppers. Evanescence. MGMT. A Day To Remember. No Doubt. Gwen Stefani. The Donnas. Avenged Sevenfold. Panic! At The Disco. Weezer. Garbage. Hole. Nirvana. The Ramones. Republica. Empire Of The Sun. Linkin Park. Deathcab For Cutie.

Victim : Jill Lee

Looks : long black hair, pale white skin, 5'6, brown eyes, bright red lipstick with heavy eyeliner. A Kat Von D wannabe basically.

Age : 22

personality : snarky, rude, holier than thou attitude, bitchy.

Sorry I hate this girl for many reasons, and you said revenge, so that would be a person I'd like revenge on ha.