Review for I need characters

I need characters

(#) midnight_star22 2011-10-12

Vampire, duhh (:

Can I be with Frank or Gerard? Or Bob if he's in the story :D

Name: Marina Lewis

Age: 22

Looks: She is 5'4 with a "look at me wrong and I'll kick your ass" attitude. She has short jet black hair with multi color fringe (http://lovelylocksofhair.tumblr.com/post/10495270942). She has purple eyes, believe it or not, like Elizabeth Taylor. They change from light purple to dark, and you better run for your life if they're dark purple! Her nails are always painted black. She's slender, but toned. She has many tattoos: one that says "Love is forever" on her right side, an equal sign on her ring finger, "Keep calm and carry on" on her back, tribal star behind her ear, and a sleeve on her arm. Her lip is pierced on her bottom lip on the right side, and also has microdermic implants (http://www.alternativelook.net/microdermal-implants/).

Clothes: She usually wears band tees, and a lot of dark colors like dark purple, blue, green, black, and occasionally red. Almost always wears skinny jeans, and black knee high converse with neon green laces. She MIGHT wear shorts if it gets unbearingly hot.

Personality: She's unbelievably tough for her size, and will get into a fight to protect the ones she loves and care about. She is very outgoing, and loves to have fun. She's a sucker for animals! Most often people are afraid to talk to her when they see her, but she'll go up and talk to them and show how nice she can be until that person pisses her off.

Back story: She was 16 years old when she was sold..Her dad and mom had always abused her, but no matter how hard she tried she couldn't leave. Unbeknownst to her, her dad had been gambling.. A LOT. To pay off his debt, he sold her to the man he owed so much money to. He made her his slave and for six years, she just took it..but one day she snapped and in a fit of rage, she killed him. HIS boss, a vampire named Don, saw how much potential she had and turned her into a vampire against her will. For the last 11 years, she's been trying to find him to get her revenge. Immortality has its perks, but she misses being human.

Music taste: MCR, FOB, The Used, Green Day, Paramore, P!ATD, and Nickelback

Anything else: She can read minds and is super fast(how very cliche and twilight of me.). She also sings and can play any instrument you give her.

Requests: Nahh..

Story name: "Under the Blood Red Moon" maybe?

Happy writing, can't wait to read it :D
Let me know if you need anything else!