Hey Annie, so you found this place. Do these guys know how to party or what?
You might want to try "interwove," or better yet, "dark hair interwoven with blonde." Also, I get that this is supposed to be the ominous intro passage, and it's effective overall, but the discussion of her hair color doesn't really hold a candle to the other stuff.
~"Does she always go alone, Sam," a voice asked.~ You need a question mark.
I am intrigued. How did anyone manage to kidnap Selene and Michael's kid in the first place? What is it down in the tunnels that Selene thinks might lead to her? Are there lycan chicks now?