Um... yeah Awesome story so far from what I've read but I noticed a slight error. Okay... in one of the earlier chapters, Pete and Amy went out to the park for ice cream. Well, in this chapter you said that Amy is vegan. Vegans don't eat meat or dairy products. Vegetarians on the other hand don't eat meat but they do eat dairy products. Just thought I'd point that out. Sorry if I sound like a bitch or anything. It's a really great story. I'm going to read the rest of the chapters right now.