'One day Jade became sick of the stench I was giving off and chucked a bucketful of freezing cold water on me. Drenching me and my mattress. '
Hahaha! Man I would pay to see that!!
Good job! Although I have to admit, there were a few moments at the end when I thought you were going to make Davey and Jade get together (despite you telling me that you wouldn't). I love how they were all in on the crime; now I'm forever gonna be giving hotel laundry carts a second glance!!!!
Author's response
Haha. I'm so glad you liked it! Yes, at times it did seem like Jade and Davey were going to get together. But I really DIDN'T want that to happen. They're more like brothers in this story :)