I'm shocked! I can't believe this is your first fanfiction, it seems like you've been writing it for a long time. I don't know, this is cute because it makes me think that Mikey is a child, and Gerard's trying to be a good big brother, which is always cute, but it's a bit sad too, because it reminds me of all that happened to Mikey at the Paramour Mansion and how he used to sleep in Gerard's bed because he was so scared. When I think about it like this, his nightmare doesn't seem so childish, but shows a vulnerable side of him. I kinda imagine Mikey to be the kind of person that you wouldn't be able to of something's going wrong, and not just because he won't say anything, but because he puts up such a good front. Then it's really sad to see him with all his walls down and crying and sleeping in his older brothers bed. Well anyway, this is great work, just like you always do.
Author's response
Thank you very much, that's very nice of you. :)