Good one. I like that the jaguar is influencing Harry's thinking. Nice troll attack. Interesting developments with Karina. I see that ending in tragedy; not sure if her enemies will win, or she'll fall out with Harry.
Wonder if the Harry Hunters will come upon them in the jungle. If they do, will they get away alive? Or will the group try subtifuge and convince them that Harry isn't there?
I can see the cartoon squirrel on the shirts :-) That would be funny if Harry and Luna showed up somewhere wearing them.
And who sent the searchers? Dumbledore, or Voldemort?
Exciting story. Looking forward to more. Thanks for writing it.
Tom A.
Author's response
Perhaps we haven't seen the last of the bounty hunters. Good question on who sent them. One day I'll let you know. Thanks for the review.~Jim