This is great. I don't want them to do it. If they die and go to heaven, Gerard will hate Frank for letting Mikey go through with that. At least he didn't die alone, though. Frank was right by his side. I kind of like how it seems like you're saying "you're not Gerard, Frank." It seems like things'll get better when he stops trying to be there for Mikey the way Gerard was. When he stops trying to be more than enough. Enough is all that Mikey needs, and he doesn't need anything more or less. I would like a continuation because I like when things are set in concrete. I know me, and I know that I'd be thinking about whether they jumped or not and whether they died or not. My brain would be coming up with all different sorts of things all day, which is good, but I'd never be satisfied with just one, so I wouldn't even be able to imagine an ending. Great job, though. It was very well written and I could really imagine the scenes like I was right there to watch it.
Author's response
Thank you very much! I'll try to continue it as soon as possible, but I'm not quite sure where to take it. I've got ideas for two possible outcomes (them dying and them living), but I'm not sure which way to take it. Anyway, thank you soooo much for reviewing! :)