hmm-hmm, oh god, this is no good D: i mean, nothing wrong with the chapter, but you know... i'm so worried about them >_< this is absolutely not going to end well (and how is that a surprise?)
oh, whatever. i can't explain myself properly; just know that i liked this chapter and thank you (: and btw, the gig sounded awesome... gosh, i'm just so jealous to you at the moment D:
Author's response
I read the beginning of your review and had a panic attack! - My story is no good!? Then I realised you meant the situation. Lol.
Sx