Awesome! xD
1) Maybe you should include Phin a bit less,but don't remove her completely.
2) My favorite would have to be Gerard. I mean he acts all naive and stuff, while Frank is kinda evil xD
3) You're writing skills are waaay better than mine!
4) Yup, epic writer xD
7) I am a teenage girl But I'm 13, close to 12, but I think I'm old enough to read this ;)
*P.S. Could you maybe include more Bob in this? He's all mysterious, and I always wonder why he doesn't like Frank so much. I get the feeling that he likes Gee sometimes xD*