it took me twenty minutes to read this. my roommate is taking apart his les paul with a fucking butcher knife. it's not an epiphone, not a gibson, so no worries i suppose. anyway, if i praise you anymore than i previously have i will feel like a stalker.
but taking that risk:
i thought the * was misplaced. it's not often you find footnotes in fanfic. i loved it.
Author's response
Terry Pratchett has a great way with footnotes. I just think the * looks pretty - HI HI!