i just read the whole story i and i love it! you are not a terrible writer you nimrod. you're great, and i MUST read more so update SOON YOU MOTHERFUCKER OR THEN I WILL COME TO YOUR HOUSE WITH PITCHFORKS AND SHIZZ. muhahahahahahaha ill get you a Christmas present when you next update yay
Author's response
Thank you, sometime I just need some reassurance you know? I PROMISE I WILL UPDATE QUICKER!
A Christmas present would be great! Thank you for reviewing, you are lovely.