AMAZING. just.....amazing. i dont even know where to start. the way you write, its just like, i dunno, real. like it feels whenever i read something you write that it actually happened or something idek im babbling. but really this is just awesome!! i love it!! i know, thats like all i ever say on ur stories, but its true theyre all just so good you cant really say anything else!
if u were to continue, itd be amazing and like, just awesome. its already perfect! continue if you like, itd be an awesome story. just, awesome. my ginormus vocabulary i usually confuddle my friends with just disappears when i read what you write because i can only think of "amazing", "awesome", "asdfghjkl" and it is all of those!! everything you write. just awesome.
this works as a oneshot, but would be great continued. anywayz, just KEEP WRITING.
i love your writing your just amazing.
this is really long and im babbling about the same stuff over and over again. but you get the point. i promise im usually much better articulated, lol. xD
Oh my god, thank you so much! This review has seriously made my day :') I'm so glad you liked it- I do try and make them feel as real as possible.
I'm probably not going to continue this cause i think it's better as a oneshot, but thanks so much for your support (: thanks for taking the time to write such a lovely review! :D