I loved the last line! That was cute. This entire chapter was cute. I still love how she's blind. It's such a change from most stories. (:
As for suggestions... I wonder what all she saw in the future of him? Are we gonna learn more? Is Mikey going to ask to see her again? Is it a traveling circus?
Thanks for the note at the bottom. I'm definitely going to be doing a sequel because of the positive feedback. It'll be up here pretty soon. (: Thank you for reading that story, hope you enjoy the sequel!
Thanks :) and that's given me an idea... Hmmmmm.... stroked imaginary beard :D
And yey!!!!!!!!!! Can't wait for it!! XP