Unreadable - ever hear of spacing? Punctuation and spelling is fine, but a solid wall of text is something the reader shouldn't have to wade through to enjoy a story. Now, while MSTing can be funny, this missed the mark totally. Don't know the people MSTing, don't care about them. Also, if you are going to post something in a particular category section, please make more than a passing reference to the subject please.
Author's response
Thanks for the tip on spacing, I didn't even notice that. While others may disagree with you on the MSTing itself, thank you for telling what you think.