It was good, I liked it =) You did pretty god for someone who wasn't used to doing detailed gore =). I'm used to it, not with some of the stuff I have posted on here, but I do throw out some good detailed gore. A person you could look at for reference in gore would be Sassy. Find her name in the Fic Recs, MCR fics part of the Forum and click on her name. Look for the one mentioning desolation row =). Good one-shot though =)