Yay! Another one! As far as the french, simplification is the only correction I'd make on "thank you" it's just "Merci" =)
(: Thank for for the review! I really appreciate hearing from you on stories!
Also, thank you so much for the assistance with french. I'm a french failure lol. I just wanted to add... to Rian's character. I don't know. I like to make my characters as realistic in my mind as I can and so, though me(the writer) is not french... my character is haha.