#flyingsmaoke thanks =] i do actully have my basic story line planned out, ya know like my ending and inbitweeny bits and stuff, and thier is a reasn for her random shooting-ness, im just not going into till nearer the end, what i meant by the little thing at the bottem is i need too know what kind off things you guys would like 2 see worked into it :) so it appeals to as many of u as possible xxxxxx