Review for Twins

Twins

(#) RainPaw 2006-10-19

That was great! My first fanfiction was terrible. And don't worry about the grammar thing, I myself am terible at spelling. And what do you mean by an editor? cause I would like to help in anyway, if I have time with all my other fanfictions and schoolwork, God, I think the teachers are trying to see how much homework they can give us before we explode. great story can't wait for the next chapter.

Author's response

i'm not sure what you guys call it...beta-readers or something...what i'm looking for is ppl just proofread my work..check for grammar, spelling and give me some ideas as of what to add and what to take out