This was so beautiful! I admit the pov switch confused me at first but once I stopped being an idiot and realised I hadn't clicked on some waycest my mistake I completely loved this! It was so well written and sad and the dialog a place I feel so many fail was so real you could really see the boys saying the things they did. I love all your writing and this was no exeption!
Author's response
Sorry that it was confusing, I was worried that it made no sense whatsoever so I'm really sorry that it was a bit confusing. That taken into consideration I can see why you may have mistaken the beginning for a Waycest!
Thank you very much; I'm really, really glad that you liked this despite the confusing start! Dialogue definitely isn't my strongest point so to hear that you think it sounded realistic really does mean a lot to me!
Thank you very much for taking the time to leave such a kind review; you've made me smile! :)