You know we are like mentaly on the same level! I was thinking the same thing! I did see the video on youtube and I love it! Thanks for your suggestions. I like how you aren't afraid to add your opinion when I finish this story I will have surprise for you at the end. It's nothing big and epic but it will show my appreciation for your support, opinion and devotion to my story. One girl who was a fan stopped reading and commenting. I guess she lost interst but even if my story is slow at parts (which I know it can be for me atleast) you still read, rate and comment and that means alot to me.