Your writing honestly leaves me speechless sometimes. (Not that I was actually speaking to begin with, but you know what I mean XD) It's so descriptive without being overloaded with unnecessary adjectives that it's pretty much perfect, I really love reading it. And this story is one of the greatest I've ever read, fanfic or otherwise. I'm so happy things are looking up. Gee better sober up and make Mikey smile or I'll karate chop him into little pieces xD Keep up the awesome work, I'm excited for more!
Author's response
Wow, thank you so very much! I'm really pleased that you like my writing! I was really worried that the way I write gets really off topic and dull, so to hear that you like reading it really does mean a hell of a lot!
I really can't describe how grateful I am for such a lovely, uplifting review; you've got me smiling like a wildthing! :)