I really like this fic, its dark and interesting. The only bad thing I would say is that you don't want to rush things- like make the relationship between the two really strong, really quickly, otherwise in my opinion the story isn't as good. But apart from that- great storyline and great characterisation. Umm.. Could you look at my fic? If it isn't too difficult... It's called Give 'Em Hell, Kid. Thank you. Please update soon!
Author's response
Thanks for the advice! I'll make sure i slow it down(: Thank you XD No problem, i'll read your story(: and I will update today