wooooow - that was great. thank you! it sounds weird that i find this chapter great as it's mostly about fighting but who the fuck cares. i liked it anyhow.
and it wasn't really cliche... well, maybe a bit, but you know what? it was a bit cliche but in good way, it still sounded amazing. that's really a talent, you know, to write about things like that and still make it beliavable.
...and i love The Simpsons... and don't really like Monty Python :D hahaha, guess he's okay... we were just once forced to watch Monty Python's Meaning of Life (or whatever it is) in the ninth grade and i got traumatized as the day sucked anyway. lol, whatever - thanks for this chapter and am waiting for more.
Author's response
I love punch ups, so I know where you are coming from? And yeah, it was cliche, as much as I try to avoid that. But I'm glad you thought that I pulled it off! I actually love your reviews! Sorry - they're just great!
But you got traumatised by Monty Python? How?! XD, nah, fair enough if you don't like 'em - each to their own!
And I'll be writing more momentarily!
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