I think Phin is cool, it just kinda annoyed me how her and Frank were constantly kissing, and were so close.
But then again, that's just part of the story.
Other than her strangely close relationship with Frank, I actually do like her.
And I really can't believe it's ending, I am seriously in lesbians with this story.
It's got to be one of my favourites and I've read at least a billion of fanfics.
I can't wait for the next chapter, but at the same time I'm dreading it because it'll be closer to the end.
I'll probably cry like a dumbass when it's over.
Will we be able to find out if Gerard stays in Cali?
But anyways you are a fuckin great writer and I'll mourn the end of this story like a death.
I'm rambling aren't I? Oh well.
But yeah. No words can describe how much I'll miss waiting for your updates.
But I know there's got to be an end, and at least we know Frank and Gerard are together now.
Ok now I really need to shut the fuck up no one wants to read this long ass review.
Ok you're amazing.
xx
Author's response
Yeah - I get that with OCs too, so it's kinda hypocritical that I made them do that! But yeah, it was basically to get Gerard jealous, and I wanted to put her in 'cos she's a character that's been hanging around in my head since forever!
I'm glad you like my story so much, it really is great to hear! I'm sad to be ending it, and will probably mourn it too. But again, I'm saying NOTHING 'bout the ending so...
I ramble too, and I like long reviews! Again, it's great to hear how much you love this and big ass THANK YOU! And I assure you - I'm not amazing in anyway, just write kickass stories! ;D
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