Review for You & I in Unison

You & I in Unison

(#) mychemicalbitchbot 2012-02-05

It was sweet... But it somehow... Didn't feel right. I liked it and everything, but there seemed to be something missing. Like someone is forgetting something ARG I DON'T KNOW I LIKED IT SO SUE ME! But it still felt off. Is something big and bad going to happen soon? Good chapter, update when you can :D

Author's response

Yeah, I haven't really been in the 'zone' lately so writing this chapter was difficult. I feel like this story is going so slow and that each chapter is the same so I'm trying to get it to move faster, if that makes sense. Mayyyyybe, maybe not... Thanks for reviewing!