I thought it was really good, the part where Amelie snapped at Gerard and Adam was really convincing ad the story line is really good, can't wait for the next chapter! So please hurry up and post it :)
Author's response
Hello Ellie
Thank you so much. I appreciate your thoughts. It means a lot to me you've taken time to read the story. I hope you stay and read on some more.
Cheers,
A