Review for Orphan Re-Write

Orphan Re-Write

(#) MySuicideInSilence 2012-02-10

I just found this story today and read it so far and it is a great plot,but I got the shit scared out of me in some points.Jasmine's one hell of a scary nine year old.But I still like this story so,please continue? (And btw,my name is Jasmine too)